Mature Wounds

Hear her story, my soul is disturbed

for a moment the mind was chaotic

My heart flutters like a race

but my common sense returns

This wound is very painful

I realized, I understood

Precisely the wound matured me

bring me to consciousness

There are things that we don’t deserve

There are things that we really should have

Life must continue to go hand in hand with the time

3 thoughts on “Mature Wounds

  1. Beautifully written, profound and reflective. Thank you so much for the follow, Ronal. I really appreciate this. However, there is a much better writer than me. I strongly recommend you and all your followers my friend Mario Savioni’s novelette “Pickles and Tarts” (very short chapters, easy to read, each chapter can be understood without reading the previous one). It is a story where 54-year-old Frank has been selected by 19-year-old Nicole through a dating site. Frank looks at Nicole’s photos on the site and is attracted to her beauty. Nicole tells him she has a boyfriend and is not interested in a romantic relationship. She adds: “It’s fun to talk to different people sometimes.” The only apparent thing Frank and Nicole seem to have in common is their interest to write stories. Perhaps they want to meet just to write one together? Now Frank has already started to imagine this story, a story-within-the-main-story. “Pickles and Tarts” is a lovely story of illusion-delusion, dream-reality, non-conformist with the Capitalist system, reflective on love, sex, drugs, abuse, loneliness and human relationships in today’s world. It is profound and highly intriguing. I recommend chapter 14:

    https://savioni.wordpress.com/2019/05/06/pickles-and-tarts-chapter-14/

    And also Mario’s beautifully relaxing music:

    https://savioni.wordpress.com/2019/05/14/gliding-grace-a-composition-by-mario-savioni/

    Mario is a very kind person and I am sure he will appreciate your comments. Without him I would never have started my blog nor crossed paths with yours.

    https://savioni.wordpress.com/2019/05/14/gliding-grace-a-composition-by-mario-savioni/

    Mario is a very kind person and I am sure he will appreciate your comments.

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